Joined: Feb 21, 2005 Posts: 614 Location: Nebraska XP: 0
Posted: Sun May 28, 2006 1:27 pm Post subject: REVIEW/ TESTERS WANTED
Do you like to read? Do you like sci-fi? Do you like Halo? Do your friends and family tell you your to blunt and truthful with your judgement?
If you answerd yes to all of these i need your help.
I am finished with me Halo Novel (yes yes,)
The novel is 257 pages long, 52 illustrations- and I need people to review it, and eventually when finsihed the PDF format that will include atll illustrations- that too.
This must be kept confidental as I want to maintain it a secert before submiting it to halo.bungie.org-
reviews must respond to
1. Story (is the plot something that would occur in the Halo Universe)
2. How easy it to follow and imagine what is happening
3. Over all quality of each chapter or segment.
If you are intrested please post here- story will be submited through e-mail.
impwiz V.I.P. Lifetime
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Posted: Sun May 28, 2006 4:09 pm Post subject:
hook it up loki, i'll give it a proof read and let you know what i think. Always down for a long, nerdy read. hehe jk
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Loki77 360-HQ Freak
Joined: Feb 21, 2005 Posts: 614 Location: Nebraska XP: 0
Posted: Sun May 28, 2006 6:56 pm Post subject:
sweet sweet- pm e-mail where i can send it-
Here how it will work- i will give you a Plot over-view, and you will tell me what you think, please be honest-
then i will send you a chapter at a time, read it, review it, and make any suggestions you want. If you have expirence with the halo story (games or books etc.) Then that would be good- just as long as you know what is happening.
here are the sources i have looked into so i could write this (you could say the story should be, or atleast have an "authentic" feel):
Halo: Fall of reach (book)
Halo: The Flood (book)
Halo: First Strike (book)
The art of Halo (Book)
Halo (xbox) - 87 pages of notes illustrations, diagrams
Halo 2 (xbox) - 92 pages of notes, illustrations, diagrams
I love bees (audio) - 164 pages of notes, sketchs, diagrams
Translations of the universe (Halo 2 LE addon)
Halo Soundtrack 1- Hidden trascropts
Halo Soundtrack 2- Hidden Transcripts
The Holy Bible (Turst me, if your a halo fan you would understand)
Ring World (book)
Of Norse gods (book)
Dantes Devine Comedy(book)
Greek & Roman Mythology(book)
The battle of Sparta (Book)
Thats it- all my sources, or, things i took notes from in order to make this happen- its going to be huge i think- im not looking for sponsorship from bungie or M$- just something to help people pass the time by while waiting for Halo 3- which if you can tell, im a fan of-
OneGoodReason 360-HQ Experienced
Joined: May 23, 2006 Posts: 161 Location: Australia XP: 0
Posted: Mon May 29, 2006 11:00 am Post subject:
I have recently been reading fan fics on bungie.net and would love to see how they compare, **i will be honest**
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Loki77 360-HQ Freak
Joined: Feb 21, 2005 Posts: 614 Location: Nebraska XP: 0
Posted: Tue May 30, 2006 4:53 am Post subject:
alright- i will be sending PM's and then be sending Chapter 1 to everyone- including PLOT outline, with details- so please dont get lost!!
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Loki77 360-HQ Freak
Joined: Feb 21, 2005 Posts: 614 Location: Nebraska XP: 0
Posted: Tue May 30, 2006 7:34 am Post subject:
HUSH YOU!!! Dont think i dont remeber your little attack on my squirrl army- *EVIL GRIM*
darn youve uncovered my plan to attack your squirrel army again. i will have to infiltrate elsewhere _________________________________________________________ XBOX
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Loki77 360-HQ Freak
Joined: Feb 21, 2005 Posts: 614 Location: Nebraska XP: 0
Posted: Wed May 31, 2006 11:48 am Post subject:
ok- first e-mail and test sent- To rs6 of crouse! rs6_n2o, feel free to post any suggestions here to, leave messages to people who might want to help- just dont release any plot info- you can hint at it like - god this sucks- or - man, its like im PLAYInG halo 3- or what ever pompus bull-poo you want to say- but what ever it is, be HONEST! Dont worry about be truthful, i think its the only way people will learn, if you point out there errors- trust me, i R have no shame...
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